Mouthing Off Ch. 04

Put your advert somewhere else.

Hi anonymous.

It's fine to advertise your stuff, but a comment on a story is not the place to do it. This place is for saying something about the story.

Also, if you want to publicise yourself why do you post as anonymous?

I am so happy to see your new writing. I really like your stories and read them over and over. Welcome back.

You are very kind Anonymous.

I don't go away for ever, but life often provides me with things to do other than writing.

Thanks for your support.

ok....this story seems to lack something

Well, hello Alphabeather...long time no read...it would have been a little more of a turn on if Greg had been part of the scenario ...like his view of seeing his Brenda being gang banged perhaps...Hope life is treating you well....Val

Read on

Sorry you found it lacking Val. Wait for the next instalment to see if I redeem myself. Could be a bit of a wait. I have other things to do. :-)

Oh thank every deity on earth! He has something else to do besides write. Take your time. Don't rush on our account.