Such an erotic and imaginative sexy story! Go Susan, bring us some more!
I really love the way this tale is evolving and such an imagination in the writer and our minds about hypnosis! I keep thinking Linda will awaken and find her blouse open and her mouth doing unspeakable things with Albert. I can only imagine what a role playing day would be with your significant other in a scenario like this. The story and writer have me wanting to explore the hypnotic theory and actions to see if something like this could work, for a Monday, this is the best happening and a treat to read! Susan Jill Parker - the master with words and entertaining us- Five stars today SJP- keep us smiling ! :) :) :) Smiling Jaybird :) :)
Susan, you are the best in my opinion. You always have been able to create suspense as to what comes next in you stories. Anxiously awaiting your continued installments.
First...we love erotic stories involving hypnosis. I have been hypnotized on stage. I don't recall anything. Family who were there either won't tell me or they make up stuff. But ever since then I have Albert's thirst to know more about it. I know the story is completed now, but certain thoughts keep coming to my mind. I see myself as Emma. I have someone picked out as Albert. I see Emma as truly hypnotized and someone at the party inadvertantly used the word "Beetlejuice" and she stripped. When the time allotment ended, which fortunately for her was shortly after she stripped, she either thought someone at the party had hypnotized her or that Albert had. Now...key element...Linda had overheard Albert "trying" to hypnotize Emma and decided to reach him a lesson, and pretended to be hypnotized and did all those things with Albert at first to see how far he would go, but as she got into it, she found that she really enjoyed it and was getting the sexual enjoyment she had been missing for years. She was onto a good thing...
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Such an erotic and imaginative sexy story! Go Susan, bring us some more!
I really love the way this tale is evolving and such an imagination in the writer and our minds about hypnosis! I keep thinking Linda will awaken and find her blouse open and her mouth doing unspeakable things with Albert. I can only imagine what a role playing day would be with your significant other in a scenario like this. The story and writer have me wanting to explore the hypnotic theory and actions to see if something like this could work, for a Monday, this is the best happening and a treat to read! Susan Jill Parker - the master with words and entertaining us- Five stars today SJP- keep us smiling ! :) :) :) Smiling Jaybird :) :)
Getting better
Story started slow for me but part two is better .Hope you do more and maybe add a page speed it up just a little .
much better than part one
This was an improvement from the first chapter which was full of plot holes and an unlikable protagonist. Hopefully each chapter will get better.
Yes, this is nice
I tell you, this is getting better, love the way this is going. Can't wait to read next chapter.
Gets better and better
The story is getting better and better and I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Thanks for this arousing chapter.
Susan, you are the best in my opinion. You always have been able to create suspense as to what comes next in you stories. Anxiously awaiting your continued installments.
So Much To Say
First...we love erotic stories involving hypnosis. I have been hypnotized on stage. I don't recall anything. Family who were there either won't tell me or they make up stuff. But ever since then I have Albert's thirst to know more about it. I know the story is completed now, but certain thoughts keep coming to my mind. I see myself as Emma. I have someone picked out as Albert. I see Emma as truly hypnotized and someone at the party inadvertantly used the word "Beetlejuice" and she stripped. When the time allotment ended, which fortunately for her was shortly after she stripped, she either thought someone at the party had hypnotized her or that Albert had. Now...key element...Linda had overheard Albert "trying" to hypnotize Emma and decided to reach him a lesson, and pretended to be hypnotized and did all those things with Albert at first to see how far he would go, but as she got into it, she found that she really enjoyed it and was getting the sexual enjoyment she had been missing for years. She was onto a good thing...
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