This story badly needs a continuation, since she is married to his affiliate but wants to continue with him...on ANYTHING. Perhaps she can accidently get pregnant by him in a continuation story?
You craft great stories. Low on character development some times but very compelling nonetheless. But please, force yourself to stay away from the word 'voluptuously'.
Well done. Subject not all that unique, but you held my intense concentration throughout. Thank you.
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Anonymous09/15/15
The tension which most of us can identify with...
The vast majority of homo sapiens recognize the need for sex and all of the surrounding lust and desire to kiss, cuddle and fuck and suck our ladies every way imaginable and the more unique the better to stimulate all of us and our playmates.
When we see a friends wife or daughter and vice versa our balls tighten up ready for action and p l e a s u re !
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Anonymous02/05/16
GOOD STUFF
Wide open to the subsequent chapters of their affair.
English
Recognition....and Desire
This story badly needs a continuation, since she is married to his affiliate but wants to continue with him...on ANYTHING. Perhaps she can accidently get pregnant by him in a continuation story?
Hot Stuff!
I did say HOT, didn't I?
Vocabulary
You craft great stories. Low on character development some times but very compelling nonetheless. But please, force yourself to stay away from the word 'voluptuously'.
Very entertaining
Well done. Subject not all that unique, but you held my intense concentration throughout. Thank you.
The tension which most of us can identify with...
The vast majority of homo sapiens recognize the need for sex and all of the surrounding lust and desire to kiss, cuddle and fuck and suck our ladies every way imaginable and the more unique the better to stimulate all of us and our playmates.
When we see a friends wife or daughter and vice versa our balls tighten up ready for action and p l e a s u re !
GOOD STUFF
Wide open to the subsequent chapters of their affair.
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