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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh903/21/14

a truly observant

Percep'shun !!! 5-ed

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by Cleardaynow03/21/14

Thank you Ashe

Your kindness is one of the finest and strongest features of the site

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by Oldbear6303/22/14

Cleardaynow

So many feelings are being described here, in such a short few lines. I keep coming back to a sense of relief that the battle is over, and the last line leaves me uneasy. It would be interesting to know what inspired these thoughts but probably better to let my own experiences guide me through it... Excellent.

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by tazz31703/22/14

MANY OF US REFUSE TO ACCEPT

the fickle finger of fates, TK U MLJ LV NV

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