"Oops, Sorry," Dean Flashes Wife #1

OOPS SORRY has a super hot start with the feeling of more to come!

Susan Jill Parker, you are doing it again, teasing we readers with anticipation of more hot erotic words and thoughts. Here we are wondering how far Kim is willing to go, but I am wondering if Kim isn't already aware of what Dean has in store for her and showing off to the horny boys on the deck? Only a master storyteller and author like Susan can capture the right scene and words to make this all happen. I will never go to a mall again without circling the food court and escalator areas, might even have to go looking for some shoes ! I remember going to a civic group meeting many years ago and sitting across from me at the leaders table was an attractive lady with beautiful shoes fitted on fabulous legs that led right up to an - OOPS No Panties! Once our eyes locked in togetherness, our fate was sealed! The after meeting was tremendous. Keep us entertained Susan ! :) :) Smiles Jaybird :)

maybe it was the subject matter??? i didn't much care for it

Hope You Don't Mind Criticism

Far, far, far, far, far too drawn out and repetitious. Disjointed. As a female writer, this would be considerably better if told by Kim. We are not turned on by forced rape. Entirely different story if she knew she was being watched and willfully participated to teach her husband a lesson before kicking him out and taking every dime he has.