Giggling.............. This chapter had me holding my breath, all wired up and drooling in anticipation and then......... **Whooosh!** it had me slowly exhaling it out again in frustration. Yip, definitely a tease.... LoL
Lana is soooo lascivious and flirtatious, poor Elle didn't stand a chance... grin
Great story, I LOVE IT!
** Eagerly awaiting Chapter 02
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Anonymous03/24/14
WOW
What a tease. I loved the story and look forward to another soon. You have great potential. Keep up the good work. ChristieP
English
Winner, Winner, Chicken Dinner!
Ok, that's the best short story published here all week! Fandamtastic!
Can't wait for chapters 2 thru 25. Although I can imaging the sex will be hot, I already see a romantic connection there.
Great job! Thanks so much for your hard work!
Doc
What a nice Tease
That was a very well written, well thought out piece of erotica. With any luck you will tease us some more.
Many thanks...
The positive feedback is awesome. Thanks so much. I've got second and third chapters on the way.
TOTAL HOTNESS!
Giggling.............. This chapter had me holding my breath, all wired up and drooling in anticipation and then......... **Whooosh!** it had me slowly exhaling it out again in frustration. Yip, definitely a tease.... LoL
Lana is soooo lascivious and flirtatious, poor Elle didn't stand a chance... grin
Great story, I LOVE IT!
** Eagerly awaiting Chapter 02
WOW
What a tease. I loved the story and look forward to another soon. You have great potential. Keep up the good work. ChristieP
Damn
That was hot eh! Muddos
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