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by mainsjoseph7

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Short and sweet

Much too short!

In a setting like that there should be a lot more sex.

So how about as sequel in which your hero gets sucked off and fucked.

mainsjoseph7mainsjoseph7about 10 years agoAuthor
A sequel is coming.

Thanks for your input. I will write a second part to this story. I didn't write in a lot of sex because some bath houses have rules like you can look but don't touch unless you're invited. That's why in the story Ben only invites Chris to his shower.

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