A Bad Night for Brandi

Incredibly hot!

I loved the whole dominant woman/submissive girl approach to this story! Seriously, this one would make an excellent screenplay/script for an incredibly hot girl/girl video! I especially loved the way the policewoman didn't ignore her pretty young girlfriend's beautiful ass! Too often the women in these stories focus only on their girlfriend's breasts and pussy, but not here! I loved it! HIGHLY RECOMMENDED READING!

Good concept

I loved the concept of this story and the humiliation of Brandi. I thought there could have been a little more description involved, especially during the sex scenes. More decriptive wording needed, expand your vocabulary!

Great story

This was a really great story. I love that Stephanie was dominant, yet tender, with her young submissive. The bar scene was a highlight. Who wouldn't want to be a slavegirl after reading this?

Amazing

this was a GREAT storie!! It totally turned me on!!!!!!!

aaaaaw

another happy ending!:)

'Bad' night, eh? Don't THINK so. :P

So I guess that the bad night was when she was chased by the cop, huh. There did not seem 2 B NE BAD nights in this story! LOL
Now if she'd had 2 go downtown, it would've been a different matter, U see! But she went 'down' in an entirely different manner, I saw. :D
Good 4 HER! 4 Officer Steffi also.
Loved it
Keep writing these anecdotes, OK!
Yummy stuff, Kansas! Very Tasty, indeed. Mmm

ah-mazing

i liked that stephanie was so agressive, but also so sensual. and there was plenty of hott sexx!!

AMAZING

great story

ANOTHER GREAT STORY

i have only read two stories by Kansas and i can not wait to read the them all. Here is hoping theyt are all as good as this story.

So in the end Brandi feel in love with Stephanie ? Man, I love when sex stories have more than just rough sex but also tender and passionate love ! We need more of these !!

Good

I loved it but it needs more to it like the sex scenes could've had way more detail to it. But overall I loved it

Could have been enjoyable

I was quite liking this well-written story until the domination and the spanking started, both of which I find distasteful. However, to each his/her own I suppose.

She's leaving home.

Bye bye. Ok so not quite the beatles version, but parents are the last to know.
Liking the Dollhouse, if that doesn't change your attitude, then change the girl.
I don't blame Brandi for being scared.

Liked it. But would have been much better if it were longer. It is still a nice read that are miles ahead of most of the FF stories that can be found here.