All Comments on 'An Inconvenient Spy Ch. 01'

by TexasFarmBoy

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redlion75redlion75about 10 years ago

the only thing i saw that was off,no big oil company would sink big money into a bill like you said without in house geology reports to confirm the findings.

bigcharley43bigcharley43over 9 years ago
traveling

There is nothing i like more than a spy story with a lot of travelling and the saucy sex at the right moment. It takes more than the Rand McNally Atlas to fabricate a good travel story about a subject that is very real; the politicians that sell out to the opposition and the oil refineries.

Keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Yeah....

I would agree that a good spy story with lots of travel is worth it.... But this story is not one of those.

liz33ndliz33ndabout 9 years ago
it really is a good story

the erotic part is sincerely lacking, I found this thru a gay search, and was deeply disappointed, but I did read it all and enjoyed it anyway. It could have been deeply improved with more suspenseful sex

oldwayneoldwayneover 8 years ago
So far, so good...

Five Stars!

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 6 years ago
Well not too shabby

This one was sailing along as an entertaining tale, holding my interest, wondering what would happen next, then they land in soms sort of nature lover commun. The story then died.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Is the village you mention Holden Village on Lake Chelan?

I have lived in Wa State most of my life. It’s nice to see a story with familiar areas and locales. My mom and dad went to Holden a lot a number of years ago. Keep it up.

Chief3BlanketChief3Blanketover 6 years ago
Hum!

For some reason I reread this story and like the first time it was interesting and entertaining tale until they landed in that commune/nature retreat then it got down right boring, and the same can be said for chapter two.

WargamerWargamerover 3 years ago

Well, she cheated on him and then shoehorned him into a polyamorous relationship.

But she cheated, do not marry her. She is an immoral person.

Otherwise a good story

Scores 3/5, the cheating put me off.

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

Great cloak and dagger love story. 5++stars

WoodencavWoodencav11 months ago

Another masterpiece. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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