I love it when the action speaks, instead of the characters, clearly the love of the two is expressed beautifully through their action. Very erotic and very well written, I am glad you continue to post, continue to deviate in subject and style. I am now eager to see your next post, wondering where you'll go! Thanks!
Very Sensual
I love it when the action speaks, instead of the characters, clearly the love of the two is expressed beautifully through their action. Very erotic and very well written, I am glad you continue to post, continue to deviate in subject and style. I am now eager to see your next post, wondering where you'll go! Thanks!
No plot needed
And one needn't be Lesbian--or even be female to enjoy this well written essay.
Five star all the way!
An editor may help your submissions.
You need to learn how to structure your sentences; something an editor can help with.
Its A Great start
Now if you'd do an audio version of this you'll have both men and women pleasuring themselves to you voice and that very naughty morning wake up .
Very sensual
Well done. It has a style that reminds me of poetry that i have enjoyed. Thanks for sharing
Great
I like lesbian and your description made me very hot.
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