BabySitter Bet

story sucks

Please dont ever write one again

Wrong tags

Nonconsent, yes, reluctance, yes. But this needs a rape tab attached. This is more than just normal erotic rape fantasy, this is too possible and needs that forewarning. Not horribly written, just needs more character build up.

Great

One of your greatest stories!
Non-consent/releuctance can be equal to rape. I found no problems with this. : )

Not many good

There are a lot of lousy stories but this is a good one. One of the things that is most of a turn-on is that the wife is willing and an encourager.

nice

Always a pleasure to read your work

Great story and close to real life as well. Thank you.