All Comments on 'Playing Doctor'

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lesliejoneslesliejonesabout 10 years ago
Well done

I liked the nice easy way you developed this story and that you made it enjoyable sexually without their even having intercourse. I don't see any other stories listed so if this is your first, it's a winner.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Very nice. Very hot.

Very well done story...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
GREAT

More PLease

be24yoube24youabout 10 years ago
Happy youths

Very nice indeed. Please give us more.

mcollectmcollectabout 10 years ago
Well done

I usually don't read first submissions, but glad I made an exception. Keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker

Where was the sex

jaybird8100jaybird8100about 10 years ago
Great enjoyable story, well written, plausible :)

Cute theme and idea for a story, deserves an encore and what happens with this beautiful and caring pair. Could see a series starting here. Five stars, keep writing you have talent! Thanks! :) Smiling Jaybird :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great story

About a young couple devoted to each outer while exploring and expanding their horizons of each other.

It seems the total Wanker enjoys more violent or homosexual stories.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 10 years ago
Really enjoyed it!

Keep on writing please...a chapter two would be just fine...keep doing it the way you are!!!!!!

thebug37thebug37almost 9 years ago
Hike

Something happened that caught me aware that this trip was more than a simple hike through the woods.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I love this!

I love this SO MUCH! I love the way you portray the characters and setting, also the erotic scenes are so good! Please make more of this! Thanks again.

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