by ShareTheLove
I liked the nice easy way you developed this story and that you made it enjoyable sexually without their even having intercourse. I don't see any other stories listed so if this is your first, it's a winner.
I usually don't read first submissions, but glad I made an exception. Keep on writing.
Cute theme and idea for a story, deserves an encore and what happens with this beautiful and caring pair. Could see a series starting here. Five stars, keep writing you have talent! Thanks! :) Smiling Jaybird :)
About a young couple devoted to each outer while exploring and expanding their horizons of each other.
It seems the total Wanker enjoys more violent or homosexual stories.
Keep on writing please...a chapter two would be just fine...keep doing it the way you are!!!!!!
Something happened that caught me aware that this trip was more than a simple hike through the woods.
I love this SO MUCH! I love the way you portray the characters and setting, also the erotic scenes are so good! Please make more of this! Thanks again.