My Sis, The Incest Princess Ch. 02

Moar!

I've been waiting for a sequel. Was wishing Part 2 was a bit longer though. Moar please!

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Moar ass fucking!

could be good IF you finish it

this could be good IF you finish it and don't get the parents involved that always ruins a story. i would like to make a big suggestion listen to the complaints and ignore the kiss ass reviews that is the only way you will improve. if you listen only to the kiss asses you will never get better and your stories will suffer as will the readers.

incest is best,,!!

family incest is better!! why not get the parents involved,,makes for good reading!! and more variations and involvement,,,,,,

true story?

this sounded like a real life situation , with all the (should I do that times ) in it. maybe you can remember more know that you have written this one . PS don't you have spell check on your computer, mine is all the time correcting me . coin of phrase (if you don't use it you lose it )

I think it would help if you built up the scene and lead up to the encounter with more detail. Paint a canvas for your reader, for them to be able to picture exactly what this scene would look like from the characters point of view. I also was hoping ch.2 would be a little longer also. Keep going, you have a good story here, I'd like to see what else "The Incest Princess" can come up with!

Carry on

I'd like to see where this thing goes!

fantastic!!

hope you continue with more chapters to this story. it is a very good if not great story,so i hope you continue.

Great story so far, but no keep the parents out.
The kid can find some work in his sisters city and the parents can be none the wiser.
So when are the kids arriving? Just because Stacey said they were good did not mean she was on the pill, maybe she was really into the idea and decided to take it all the way without telling her brother?