I've been waiting for a sequel. Was wishing Part 2 was a bit longer though. Moar please!
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Anonymous03/28/14
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Moar ass fucking!
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Anonymous04/02/14
could be good IF you finish it
this could be good IF you finish it and don't get the parents involved that always ruins a story. i would like to make a big suggestion listen to the complaints and ignore the kiss ass reviews that is the only way you will improve. if you listen only to the kiss asses you will never get better and your stories will suffer as will the readers.
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Anonymous04/16/14
incest is best,,!!
family incest is better!! why not get the parents involved,,makes for good reading!! and more variations and involvement,,,,,,
this sounded like a real life situation , with all the (should I do that times ) in it. maybe you can remember more know that you have written this one . PS don't you have spell check on your computer, mine is all the time correcting me . coin of phrase (if you don't use it you lose it )
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Anonymous05/06/14
I think it would help if you built up the scene and lead up to the encounter with more detail. Paint a canvas for your reader, for them to be able to picture exactly what this scene would look like from the characters point of view. I also was hoping ch.2 would be a little longer also. Keep going, you have a good story here, I'd like to see what else "The Incest Princess" can come up with!
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Anonymous06/08/14
Carry on
I'd like to see where this thing goes!
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Anonymous10/25/14
fantastic!!
hope you continue with more chapters to this story. it is a very good if not great story,so i hope you continue.
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Anonymous02/11/15
Great story so far, but no keep the parents out.
The kid can find some work in his sisters city and the parents can be none the wiser.
So when are the kids arriving? Just because Stacey said they were good did not mean she was on the pill, maybe she was really into the idea and decided to take it all the way without telling her brother?
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Anonymous06/16/15
Love
You made me hot and so wet. I know it's sick but I would so give myself to my older brother. Still shaking from part one then driven over the edge by part two. What a beautiful fuck. Imagining myself straddling his hips reaching for his long hardness, looking into his eyes as my lips spread slowly surrendering to his beautiful cock. Ooooh fuck your good. Would you like to Ipullrabbits out of me. Loni
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Anonymous06/16/15
great story and great last comment
Here's a young female who'd love to get the shit fucked out of her by her big brother. Look, honey, as always, communication, including the nonverbal kind, is the key. There are lots and lots of brothers, who knows maybe most of them, who look over their sweet little sis, think about the cute little coochie she's got between her legs, and get hard in their pants. Start making raunchy comments around him, wiggle your pretty little ass at him, smile and dart meaningful glances at what he's got waiting for you under his fly. I bet that pretty soon you'll be getting the hot incestuous fuck of your life, and your guy'll be grunting and blowing his brotherly balls up your tight little twat.
Moar!
I've been waiting for a sequel. Was wishing Part 2 was a bit longer though. Moar please!
* * * *
Moar ass fucking!
could be good IF you finish it
this could be good IF you finish it and don't get the parents involved that always ruins a story. i would like to make a big suggestion listen to the complaints and ignore the kiss ass reviews that is the only way you will improve. if you listen only to the kiss asses you will never get better and your stories will suffer as will the readers.
incest is best,,!!
family incest is better!! why not get the parents involved,,makes for good reading!! and more variations and involvement,,,,,,
true story?
this sounded like a real life situation , with all the (should I do that times ) in it. maybe you can remember more know that you have written this one . PS don't you have spell check on your computer, mine is all the time correcting me . coin of phrase (if you don't use it you lose it )
I think it would help if you built up the scene and lead up to the encounter with more detail. Paint a canvas for your reader, for them to be able to picture exactly what this scene would look like from the characters point of view. I also was hoping ch.2 would be a little longer also. Keep going, you have a good story here, I'd like to see what else "The Incest Princess" can come up with!
Carry on
I'd like to see where this thing goes!
fantastic!!
hope you continue with more chapters to this story. it is a very good if not great story,so i hope you continue.
Great story so far, but no keep the parents out.
The kid can find some work in his sisters city and the parents can be none the wiser.
So when are the kids arriving? Just because Stacey said they were good did not mean she was on the pill, maybe she was really into the idea and decided to take it all the way without telling her brother?
Love
You made me hot and so wet. I know it's sick but I would so give myself to my older brother. Still shaking from part one then driven over the edge by part two. What a beautiful fuck. Imagining myself straddling his hips reaching for his long hardness, looking into his eyes as my lips spread slowly surrendering to his beautiful cock. Ooooh fuck your good. Would you like to Ipullrabbits out of me. Loni
great story and great last comment
Here's a young female who'd love to get the shit fucked out of her by her big brother. Look, honey, as always, communication, including the nonverbal kind, is the key. There are lots and lots of brothers, who knows maybe most of them, who look over their sweet little sis, think about the cute little coochie she's got between her legs, and get hard in their pants. Start making raunchy comments around him, wiggle your pretty little ass at him, smile and dart meaningful glances at what he's got waiting for you under his fly. I bet that pretty soon you'll be getting the hot incestuous fuck of your life, and your guy'll be grunting and blowing his brotherly balls up your tight little twat.
one excellent line
"hahahaha is it sister flavored?"
pretty nice line
another fine story
a little short. Might have had more foreplay..maybe some ass and more work on her lovely tits
would love some tit work
a little foreplay on the tits would be nice...kinda how you did with her cunt.
Great job overall!
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