A guy needs some sympathy from family, not some bitch sister blackmailing. Sis is really a dumb bitch. They live under the same roof. Maybe some day would be his day. I am soooooo sorry I didn't bother to complete half of the page.
Mmmm made my little clitty-cock hard. I would love for a dominant woman to make me dress up for her. I look forward to see where this goes - hopefully some forced bi action soon :-)
I wish either my mother or my sister had caught me dressed in their cloths. I so wanted to get caught being a sissy. I so love wearing their cloths. I want very much to be some woman's French Maid. I would love to be forced to dress at home and be sent to run errands dressed in frilly lingerie beneath my male clothing. Better yet to be made to dress from heels to wig.
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Anonymous05/25/14
gave up
Sorry, but this is so poorly written that I quit reading. I like the premise of your plot line, but I'm one of those that just lose interest if the writing isn't good. (And by saying "not good" I'm being very polite). Your story idea is a good one. My suggestion would be to find an editor to help you fix all the errors and repost it. If the story has a smooth consistent flow it should be a good read.
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A guy needs some sympathy from family, not some bitch sister blackmailing. Sis is really a dumb bitch. They live under the same roof. Maybe some day would be his day. I am soooooo sorry I didn't bother to complete half of the page.
Mmmm made my little clitty-cock hard. I would love for a dominant woman to make me dress up for her. I look forward to see where this goes - hopefully some forced bi action soon :-)
You made me wet between my thighs.
I wish either my mother or my sister had caught me dressed in their cloths. I so wanted to get caught being a sissy. I so love wearing their cloths. I want very much to be some woman's French Maid. I would love to be forced to dress at home and be sent to run errands dressed in frilly lingerie beneath my male clothing. Better yet to be made to dress from heels to wig.
gave up
Sorry, but this is so poorly written that I quit reading. I like the premise of your plot line, but I'm one of those that just lose interest if the writing isn't good. (And by saying "not good" I'm being very polite). Your story idea is a good one. My suggestion would be to find an editor to help you fix all the errors and repost it. If the story has a smooth consistent flow it should be a good read.
Oh dear!
No part two? I loved and went looking for more...
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