The story makes little sense and the first two sentences are soooo awkward.
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Anonymous03/27/14
First - get a GREAT editor!
Because this was a complete cluster fuck. Two - get a better story line. This one was unintelligible. Three - don't make your cardboard characters dumber than rocks. There was nothing original, clever, interesting or entertaining about this mess.
Sorry, this was reality for me back then. I may have been smart in some ways but, yes, I was dumber than a rock as the world of horny women unfolded before me. I grew up with 3 brothers and it wasn't until I was married that I had my eyes opened to who and what I could attract. It took my wife and her thirty some odd gorgeous female irish cousins to get me over my shyness. I didn't resist much and it's been a helluva ride. You'll see as I add more stories. I don't have to make much up.
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Not sure what I just read?
The story makes little sense and the first two sentences are soooo awkward.
First - get a GREAT editor!
Because this was a complete cluster fuck. Two - get a better story line. This one was unintelligible. Three - don't make your cardboard characters dumber than rocks. There was nothing original, clever, interesting or entertaining about this mess.
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Some liked the story, some didn't
Sorry, this was reality for me back then. I may have been smart in some ways but, yes, I was dumber than a rock as the world of horny women unfolded before me. I grew up with 3 brothers and it wasn't until I was married that I had my eyes opened to who and what I could attract. It took my wife and her thirty some odd gorgeous female irish cousins to get me over my shyness. I didn't resist much and it's been a helluva ride. You'll see as I add more stories. I don't have to make much up.
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