It was a hot story, made hotter by the premise of being real. What was missing, I think, was the build-up. It seems strange for four friends to jump into bed together on a whim. Usually, there is some discussion, hesitation, boundaries, rules, jealousy, conflict, etc.. This story went straight to the sex. A little background, character development and tension goes a long way toward making the story a little sexier and more exciting.
English
Enjoyable Story
Rare to get the feminine perspective - let's have another!
A nice quickie
It was a hot story, made hotter by the premise of being real. What was missing, I think, was the build-up. It seems strange for four friends to jump into bed together on a whim. Usually, there is some discussion, hesitation, boundaries, rules, jealousy, conflict, etc.. This story went straight to the sex. A little background, character development and tension goes a long way toward making the story a little sexier and more exciting.
Very good
story from a new author. Written with VERY FEW mistakes.
Very nice!
Good job, that was a very hot story, I can only imagine how hot it was in person!
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