All Comments on 'The Bosses Lunch Hour'

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sensaninsensaninover 9 years ago
Love the Voice

I loved the voice in this piece, and I really felt like I was hearing a story and not just reading one. I feel like our narrator (I don't think I ever got his name. that's pretty cool) is a guy I could hang out and get a drink with. He seemed pretty normal and relatable. Everything in the story seemed like it could really happen. Actually like it did happen. Makes me wonder if the author took the old saying "write what you know" to heart and just put down a memory. If that's not the case, than I'm doubly impressed :) Overall, I really liked it!

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