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You're Getting Very Sleepy Ch. 03

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by jaybird810003/30/14

I should be getting sleepy! It's 2:14 in the morning! Great plot enhanced with a odd turn

An interesting twist this story is taking with the entry of Emma and her 'assault' on her brother for alleged hypnotic trance. Beetlejuice never had an erotic meaning to me until now-will be glad to see where our talented storyteller has our mind and imagination going next-somehow I'll just bet there are some more characters coming out of the woodwork! Another 5 star effort Susan! You have me hypnotically attracted to your writings :) Smiles and Thanks :) Smiling Jaybird

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by fletchers_arrow03/31/14

Please keep this story going. I like where you are at, now keep it further.

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by Nospy04/01/14

So messed up...

... but also so hot. I'm looking forward to part 4

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