And a hot one at that except the part where you gave me the impression she is a single parent and then mom walks in at the end. I am confused.
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Anonymous03/28/14
re: It's just a story Erik
Passing a story off as "just a story" generally means it's inconsequential, it’s nothing. This then begs the question: if it’s “just a story”, why are you defending it?
Using the “just a story” defense flies in the face of the very nature of commenting on a story. What, we’re only allowed to comment on a story with glowing praise? If not, the “just a story” defense make no sense. It’s simplistic and superficial.
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Anonymous03/28/14
Yeah, this story is about rape
This is not about consensual dominance and submission, this is a disturbing, painful rape. Having the girl scream, "Fuck me" after the fact doesn't prevent it from being rape. This deserves to have a big NONCONSENT warning at the top. There are so many ways this story could have been changed so that it wouldn't be so nauseating. Oh well.
Is people get all high and mighty when it's rape but it's okay if it's incest when you know society frowns on that as much as rape if not more yet that is okay. Oh let me guess because it's consensual then it's okay. In the end we all have thoughts and the right to write it down. If someone wants to WRITE a story about rape I have no issue about that. There is a big difference between writing about rape versus doing it. So I end this with a fuck you and tell your mother to make sure her pussy is shaved if she wants some tongue action.
Rape is irredeemable, that's probably why people get all "high and mighty". Why would you want to write a rape story anyway? I suppose you could say the same for an incest piece. Different strokes, pardon the pun. However, rape is always nonconsensual, not always the case with incest. I think that is the prime difference, despite the societal taboos of both. End of message.
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Anonymous03/28/14
Could be better
I like that it's about rape... But it could have been a bit better written at least. Rape does turn some girls on, like me for instance, regardless of what others think. It is just a story after all.
reading through the comments, I'm always surprised when people vote a story down because it contains subject matter they don't like. this is a fantasy erotic story site, and what some people get off on isn't necessarily for everyone.
if you run into a theme you find distasteful, stop reading and pick another story to jerk off too. but don't kill the story with a 1 or 2 star rating. the rating should be for how well the story is constructed and delivered, and not necessarily for the particular kink or perversion it contains.
many of my stories get killed just because some people are not into piss, and that bothers me. especially since some care just reacting to getting turned on by a topic they're supposed to abhor.
leave a comment if your puritan value system is challenged by a story, but don't kill it with a low rating.
/rant
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Anonymous03/29/14
Hot liquid?
Bull! How can it possibly be hotter than the inside of your body?
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Anonymous03/30/14
don't listen to them!
Don't think everyone disliked the story. I loved it!! If they didn't want to read about nonconsentual sex, all they had to do was go to another story. 5*!
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Anonymous03/30/14
Prudes going on about rape
I feel you have no right to bitch about rape when you clicked on a story about incest. As someone already mentioned, incest is just as much frowned upon as rape, so shut the fuck up. If it makes you uncomfortable, perhaps stop reading as soon as it gets to the rape point or don't read stories by this author. I don't know. You really do look ignorant when you're complaining about rape. Don't ruin it for people who enioy this. Personally, I loved this story. Though, there definitely should have been more spanking. Once again, shut the fuck up if you're about to complain about rape and proceed to shove your dildo in your mouth. Thank you ♥
I never thought I'd see the day when a woman called others prudes for condemning rape. A genuine surprise. Critcizing a story doesn't automatically make you a "hater". I give credit to any author who allows public comment, even if I don't like the story. There was a very common sense remark made here. If the story synopsis turns you off, perhaps you should pass on it.
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Anonymous04/01/14
tune me off
i dont like rape or forced sex
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Anonymous04/02/14
That was very detailed. I liked her shock and displeasure at the initial groping, I could hear her despaired crying when he asked her to start over and describe her day again. When I clicked on a father daughter incest story I knew exactly what I was getting and I appreciated the story.
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Anonymous04/30/14
I don't condone rape, I just get off reading/watching/imaginig fictional rape. The story was very hot, good job!
English
Report the bastard.
Not punishment it was rape.
It's just a story Erik
And a hot one at that except the part where you gave me the impression she is a single parent and then mom walks in at the end. I am confused.
re: It's just a story Erik
Passing a story off as "just a story" generally means it's inconsequential, it’s nothing. This then begs the question: if it’s “just a story”, why are you defending it?
Using the “just a story” defense flies in the face of the very nature of commenting on a story. What, we’re only allowed to comment on a story with glowing praise? If not, the “just a story” defense make no sense. It’s simplistic and superficial.
Yeah, this story is about rape
This is not about consensual dominance and submission, this is a disturbing, painful rape. Having the girl scream, "Fuck me" after the fact doesn't prevent it from being rape. This deserves to have a big NONCONSENT warning at the top. There are so many ways this story could have been changed so that it wouldn't be so nauseating. Oh well.
Trash! Rape!
Rape!
What bothers me is...
Is people get all high and mighty when it's rape but it's okay if it's incest when you know society frowns on that as much as rape if not more yet that is okay. Oh let me guess because it's consensual then it's okay. In the end we all have thoughts and the right to write it down. If someone wants to WRITE a story about rape I have no issue about that. There is a big difference between writing about rape versus doing it. So I end this with a fuck you and tell your mother to make sure her pussy is shaved if she wants some tongue action.
Rape is irredeemable, that's probably why people get all "high and mighty". Why would you want to write a rape story anyway? I suppose you could say the same for an incest piece. Different strokes, pardon the pun. However, rape is always nonconsensual, not always the case with incest. I think that is the prime difference, despite the societal taboos of both. End of message.
Could be better
I like that it's about rape... But it could have been a bit better written at least. Rape does turn some girls on, like me for instance, regardless of what others think. It is just a story after all.
ignore the haters
This was a good story and I can't wait to read the sequel.
Punishment is a weak plot.
Punishment seems to cover guilt about sex. Not a likable theme.
Consent
I'm not to keen on what appeared to be forced intercourse, not consensual sex, only 2*s from me I'm afraid.
wicked good!
nice story. love the non-consentual undertones. would have liked more spanking. well done.
you can choose what you read
reading through the comments, I'm always surprised when people vote a story down because it contains subject matter they don't like. this is a fantasy erotic story site, and what some people get off on isn't necessarily for everyone.
if you run into a theme you find distasteful, stop reading and pick another story to jerk off too. but don't kill the story with a 1 or 2 star rating. the rating should be for how well the story is constructed and delivered, and not necessarily for the particular kink or perversion it contains.
many of my stories get killed just because some people are not into piss, and that bothers me. especially since some care just reacting to getting turned on by a topic they're supposed to abhor.
leave a comment if your puritan value system is challenged by a story, but don't kill it with a low rating.
/rant
Hot liquid?
Bull! How can it possibly be hotter than the inside of your body?
don't listen to them!
Don't think everyone disliked the story. I loved it!! If they didn't want to read about nonconsentual sex, all they had to do was go to another story. 5*!
Prudes going on about rape
I feel you have no right to bitch about rape when you clicked on a story about incest. As someone already mentioned, incest is just as much frowned upon as rape, so shut the fuck up. If it makes you uncomfortable, perhaps stop reading as soon as it gets to the rape point or don't read stories by this author. I don't know. You really do look ignorant when you're complaining about rape. Don't ruin it for people who enioy this. Personally, I loved this story. Though, there definitely should have been more spanking. Once again, shut the fuck up if you're about to complain about rape and proceed to shove your dildo in your mouth. Thank you ♥
x, Miranda.
I never thought I'd see the day when a woman called others prudes for condemning rape. A genuine surprise. Critcizing a story doesn't automatically make you a "hater". I give credit to any author who allows public comment, even if I don't like the story. There was a very common sense remark made here. If the story synopsis turns you off, perhaps you should pass on it.
tune me off
i dont like rape or forced sex
That was very detailed. I liked her shock and displeasure at the initial groping, I could hear her despaired crying when he asked her to start over and describe her day again. When I clicked on a father daughter incest story I knew exactly what I was getting and I appreciated the story.
I don't condone rape, I just get off reading/watching/imaginig fictional rape. The story was very hot, good job!
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