by kategreen84
This is so good, the interplay with Lana and Elle and the back round voice of O make this a wonderful story. You leave us wondering what if any problem is to come and I find myself hoping it's nothing. Now that I've taken the hook, the humane thing is to release or filet me
Great story. I'm in awe of your writing skills. A true gift!! What's next ? More please ChristieP
Kate, you've told a brilliant story, with lovely characters, in a fairly condensed format. The trouble is, you've left us (I'm assuming I can talk for other readers) wanting more. So get stuck in over a hot computer and give us more.
Great job again Kate! Loving, sweet. Just... just... perfection!
Now may we please have many more "tastes"
As always, Thank You for your efforts.
Doc
Still anxiously awaiting a fourth chapter after re-reading this series for about the third time!
Oh my goodness, Kate! You should continue this series..! Can't get enough of them! And your writing is simply superb!
The passion between them is palpable. Hope you continue to develop their relationship. This is definitely a 'pinch-able' moment.
The Here&Now the only mo,ent of perfection, because the future will never match our expectations ...... So you did a lovely job with this 3 chapters