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I am Fucking in Love with your Writing
Fuck bro. I love the way you wrote that. I'm the kind of person that is in love with the concept of being in love with my bestfriend and that story just blew my mind. Throughout the end I didn't even care that they were having sex. I squealed like a little girl becoz of how cute the characters are. And I'm so glad Sam got to be with Justin. Omg!!! Thanks. I am sure going to read you more in the future. If you do write a book someday, tell me yah.
Incredible
This was amazing. The writing was amazing and the story is my ultimate fantasy. I've been in love with my best friend for a while now and this story was perfect for me to envision us together. Thank you. Amazingly written and beautiful x
Predictable, But DAYUM!!
Lovecraft,
I could tell during the very first page what this story was going to be about, and even how it was going to end. I'm writing this comment to let you know that even with me KNOWING, you completely captured my attention, held it, and made this a unique story by the very special way that you crafted the tale, presented the characters, and developed the ending! Your writing delivered not only the heated lust and passion, but the emotions and the way they ebbed and flowed throughout the story.
Great job! I will definitely read your other stories!
X-Man
Beautiful writing, excellent plot, and not to mention sexy as hell. Not what i was expecting, but definitely what i wanted.
Outstanding writing very erotica story.
This was and outstanding story told in a very loving and meaningful way. It shows that you can tell a very sexual story with out all the violence and just what men want. You gave this story a feel that lasting love can be found if we just love one another.
Thank you for reading???
It should be all of us, everyone who has read this, that should be thankful to you for writing it!
Very well written, and it shows how the first time between two young people should be as special.
A definite 5 Stars.
Hell, if I could, I'd give it 10!
formerly signed RaM.
I am amazed
I am amazed at my reaction. This was very sexy, I knew what was going to happen but I kept reading. I am a 71 year old man and this took me back to being 18 years old again. It is amazing how the written word can be so powerful, better than video porn.
I loved it
A beautiful, well written story that held my attention to very end. I cried too lol
Brilliant
This story was so beautiful and i was really hoping sam would get together with justin at the start and it is very different from other stories that i have read and this is my favorite story in all of the ones i have read.
love the story
I hope to see part two
Good story, well written
Very well written, with well developed characters. Good story, really good descriptions of lovemaking. Even at age 79 it makes me wish that I could have experiences like that again, but Alas . . . .
Excellent
That was a perfect ending. Too many stories on here are just about the sex. Only the best continue on to explore the other human emotions beyond lust. Definitely giving this story a 5. You earned it!
Fantastic story
My god you can write a sex scene!
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