That's What Friends Are For

I love to see your sweet side!

This was a nice, sweet story. Sam turned out to be a good surprise for everybody, I think.

Great change of pace!

Liked this one a lot LC. Much better than the depressing story you posted last contest.

Sam was a great character! A strong young woman who didn't care what anyone thought of her and after getting tired of waiting decided she was going to get what she wanted. Justin was a little needy and annoying, but for me it was perfect because it was a good portrayal of a young man his age. But in the end when Sam showed her softer side and some insecurity about putting her feelings out there Justin redeemed himself by finally "getting it" and being sweet to her.

Well done and you can be mad for the next part of this comment, but this reader loves when you treat us with something romantic.

Well done, LC

I haven't read a lot of your stuff, but this one was quite good. I think a lot of us have probably been as clueless as Justin at one time or another. Of course, it doesn't always work out like it did here.

Outstanding

Great character development and a story we all wish we had experienced.

I hope...

...that there is more from Sammi and Justin. What a sweet story, even if he so doesn't deserve her!

Although with a name like Lovecraft I confess I was expecting tentacles..../rimshot

Romantic story

I think every boy or man wants a Samantha in his life. Thanks

Clever down-to-earth girl wins over conniving witch

Always nice to see a sensible and sensual girl who knows what she wants and isn't afraid to go for it or speak her mind. Justin will really have to work hard to keep up with her and have an equal relationship. But at least he has someone to keep his head straight and his soul sweet.
And it came as no surprise that Jen was right about Sam's interest. She took a bit of a chance saying it, but I bet that afterwards the nasty bitch found it fun to tease her clueless boyfriend. No wonder she didn't respect him, but at least his friends did their best to help and it all ended well.

Good luck in the Earth Day contest

I am trying to read all of the entries and vote to support the other contestants.

Wow, just wow. Excellent story, great characters and so frikkin hot. Almost had to stop halfway through to relieve myself.
It was pretty obvious where you were going but that didn't distract at all, it actually made me more eager for the payoff. And what a payoff. One of the hottest I have ever read here. 5 stars and added to my favorite stories.

excellent

Thanks for great and believeable characters, tits and no red hair!

Really good story!

I liked it very much a combination of fucking and feelings . .

yeah shame theres not more Sams around!!

Well done!

Quite often it takes the right circumstances for friends to take the big first step. Sometimes the right one is standing in front of you. Better to take a chance than regret it

Very good ...

Even though one kind of knew where the story was heading, you told it well. Looking forward to more submissions from you.

It was well done!

I gave it 5 stars! And I have enjoyed some of your other stories also. I should have read all of them.

First time homerun.

I felt all the emotions you out into words. I could see her and him with your descriptions. I really liked the story. GREAT JOB. Keep writting till your fingers bleed.

Wow. Slow clap of applause.

Damn, damn good job. Enjoyed it from start to finish. Liked the characters and could see something like this getting going between old friends. A lot times those oldest of friends are often more than that.


Would have liked to have met the girlfriend in more that a phone call. And I'm going to have to do a story check to see if you have done a single story without the sexy girl ending up in red. Beyond that I didn't see anything that could have been changed to make it read better.

Very, very nice work.

MST

Five stars without doubt!

Excellent story. Great characters, perfect pacing, and absolutely believable (and erotic). Thanks for the work you put into writing and sharing.

We'll done

We'll written and a good plot. Looking forward to more of your work.

Enjoyed it very much

Needs a second chapter!

Girl next door

Excellent read. A well written and developed story about boy/girl next door who discover their friendship is so much more is always my favorite.

Great Story

That was an excellent story. Easily one of my favorites. Very believable and very erotic. Great character development. Keep up the great work. This is the first time I have been motivated to leave a comment

Girl Next Door

Well written, believable characters and the pace of the story progressed well. Do keep writing. A part two would be an interesting read also.

Loved It!

Well written story of two friends who became lovers and more. Perhaps a followup is in order for this one? Thank you. :-)

Tight

Great story. Well written, wonderful characters.

Nice story

A very long buildup to their first sex, but then the sex happened too fast. Her tits were bare and she was naked much too quickly. There was no tension or step-by-step unwrapping of her body. I, for one, would have preferred a nice, slow, long make-out session leading up to the actual sex.

And, re editing, there's a sentence that says: "Sam wasn't big on top, but they her breasts were perky," Either THEY or HER BREASTS needed to be deleted.

Amazing

Well written, nicely paced.

As always,

PERFECT!

Another Chapter?

This story is one of the best I've read in a long time... That said, I think another chapter is in order :) This may have not been your intention but it would fit very well in my opinion. :) Otherwise, very very well written story, truly one of the best!

Continue please!!!

This story was great. I would love to see this story develop further. You are a really talented author.

Excellent!!

Thanks for sharing.

Good luck

Liked it a lot. I was hoping for comeuppance for the girlfriend at the end, though.

That was... truly something special.

Thank you; it was great to see a young couple start together and realise their true feelings. It was also great to see a first time where the woman isn't just a doll letting the guy do whatever he wants; Sam... I mean Samantha clearly had her own desires and her dialogue was especially hot.
The only negative, from a stylistic perspective, is that Justin really doesn't have any evidence that Jen cheated on him; true his friend phoned but that basically boils down to hearsay. I'd have preferred it if he had something a little more tangible.
However that's the only issue I found with what is otherwise an amazing, brilliant story.
Thank you again.

super

very very very good-more please

I've read a few of your stories, but this was definitely my favorite. The great job you did at establishing their friendship really built the anticipation for the first time. I'd certainly welcome additional chapters, but this is a pretty good conclusion as well if you decide to keep it as a oneshot.

Absolutely loved it!

This is the first time I've actually read anything more than 4 pages because I'm just too impatient and I have to say that it is awesome! Two thumbs up and more please!

Nice

This was a good read. I will be looking for more of your stories.

Nice, but WAAAAAAAAAAY too long

This could have been done in three pages, maybe four.

Now, the writing was, for the most part, very good -- not perfect by any means, but competent -- but too much dialogue makes me think you're a Tarantino wannabe.

I'll tune in again, but please use the scissors on your next opus.

One of my very favorite stories!

Loved the way you wrote this...the time you took to get there...building the story and feelings between them...just keep writing like this ...please!!!!! I loved it!!!!!

Loved it!

You've found your new genre! Great stuff, made me laugh too which is tell tale sign of a solid story. Keep it up!

Please

Continue the story with these characters, there is more that can be told, and more escapades to explore. This was a really good read.

Nice

But based on the score and the author, I was actually a little disappointed by how predictable the story was.

Couldn't of been better...

I don't know how you could write about a better first time. Too many times people don't let out their feeling for a friend because they are afraid of losing a friendship. I loved the story and would like to read a few more chapters about Justin and Sammi.

One of the finest EVER!

Having read the positive comments, I can't possibly agree more. You captured every aspect beautifully!
In the past, I haven't been shy in telling a no-talent to "give it up," and asking Literotica to expand there voting scale to include "0." Your talent in capturing and presenting this story deserves a "5+" category. Congratulations!

Loved it

As always, a really great story with lots of hot sex and sweet moments. I really loved seeing Sammi come out with her heart's desire, and kudos to Justin for not being a dick and actually realising the gift in his arms - love seeing the girl break out of the 'friend zone' because it's only ever been my experience to watch the guy go out with bitches and then having to pick up the pieces when it all falls apart , so I was rooting for Sammi on this one! I fail to see what the issue is in regard to it being 'too long' from previous reviewers, not like you didn't put in the standard disclaimer lol (clearly they haven't read your epic SWB lol). The stories you weave around the sex are the best part in my opinion, keep doing what you do.

Good story, predictable but happy lovers

It is nice to read about sex between two people who love each other and not merely have sex. A bit of Cinderella with sex. You want these two to stick together...

It is incredibly difficult for you to write a bad story...

And we're all so fucking happy about that :P. You write some of the greatest stuff, even when it's in a debut category for you. I'll never get tired of 5 star'ing your material.

anon

dont be afraid to add onto this story really enjoyed it and would like to see how they move forward . and especially on how they break the news t othe trashy ex girlfriend

Thanks for sharing something sweet and tender!

Please pay no attention to the naysayers. Every time you write, with every story you submit, you lay yourself bare. With this one you have exhibited your sweet and tender side. Many thanks!

wonderful

Great story, I loved the vivid descriptions of the action and the emotions made me identify so easily. You made me hard , laugh and the ending brought a tear to my eyes.
Please write more

I'd give you 6 stars if I could

Keep writing!

Needs more stars

I gave you five because that's as high as it goes. Sadly. Excellent, excellent story. Loved it.