That should be Boy Toy..... Needs a lot of editing done- very difficult to read with the errors that are throughout the story.
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Anonymous03/31/14
Sorry, it's Toy Boy
In the UK - where the author and I come from - Toy Boy is the correct term, Boy Toy is an Americanism. We are not all Americans and you should accept having to raed other dialects just like we have to, on occasion, mentally translate your peculiar phrasiology.
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Anonymous03/31/14
Language.
Firstly, there are a number of spelling mistakes, errors of grammar and straightforward typos, in the story, which is not the best written work I've ever seen.
But. The author is a Brit, as am I, who has tried to write in a way acceptable to American readers (for instance, using 'ass' instead of the English 'arse') and was probably not aware that the words 'Toy Boy' are reversed in the USA. So give the guy a break and don't start a world war over the differences between UK and USA English.
And just so you know -- The language is still called "English" and so UK usage is more correct.
I do try and remember Americans read my work but generally stick to English, english.
Perhaps this is why I am said to have a number of typo's when my editor is at a loss to find them.
They are thoroughly checked on the word spellcheck, so if you can give me examples it would help in future?
English
Toy boy?
That should be Boy Toy..... Needs a lot of editing done- very difficult to read with the errors that are throughout the story.
Sorry, it's Toy Boy
In the UK - where the author and I come from - Toy Boy is the correct term, Boy Toy is an Americanism. We are not all Americans and you should accept having to raed other dialects just like we have to, on occasion, mentally translate your peculiar phrasiology.
Language.
Firstly, there are a number of spelling mistakes, errors of grammar and straightforward typos, in the story, which is not the best written work I've ever seen.
But. The author is a Brit, as am I, who has tried to write in a way acceptable to American readers (for instance, using 'ass' instead of the English 'arse') and was probably not aware that the words 'Toy Boy' are reversed in the USA. So give the guy a break and don't start a world war over the differences between UK and USA English.
And just so you know -- The language is still called "English" and so UK usage is more correct.
Typo check
I do try and remember Americans read my work but generally stick to English, english.
Perhaps this is why I am said to have a number of typo's when my editor is at a loss to find them.
They are thoroughly checked on the word spellcheck, so if you can give me examples it would help in future?
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