All Comments on 'The Torment of Stan'

It's nice to once in a while read something well written on this site.

I completely agree with Slirpuff. Top marks for you.

Well done, but, kinda SAD :(

agree with the others, this is so well written. When a story on a site for erotic literature can touch ones heart, you've achieved something.

I absolutely enjoy the grammatical excellence of your writing, and even more so when you catch us by surprise like this. Moar!!!

My oldest son died at the age of 28 ten years ago. He was my best buddy, far more than a son. The tears are running down my face, so I will stop writing this...

I cried a little myself as I wrote it. I tend to get very emotionally invested in my characters, but I apologize if it traumatized you in a way I did not intend. I want people in general to feel something when they read my work, but this may have hit a little too close to home for you. Sasha was always safe, and happy despite Stan's upset. I think the same goes for all of those that have passed. He's okay.

The whole time I was reading this I was saying "THIS ISN'T EVEN EROTIC" but in a good way because I couldn't stop reading. It was gorgeous storytelling and so heart-wrenching and screw the sex (no pun)! Like others have said, it's wonderful to find a well-written story on this site and one that manages to give characters life as well. Thanks for sharing and great job :)

I just want to say first that I love you, TM.

In the end, when Sasha says that "Mommy is waiting for you to come see her," does that mean that Emily kills herself, too? This is the second time I've read this, but I just had that thought. I hope that's not what it means. :(

He kept saying that he wanted to be with his family. The officer asked if he wanted to call anyone for him, and the tone of his voice when speaking with his partner afterwards made it seem that his wife was never there. He was talking to his wife who died in that accident, the accident he blamed himself for. He wanted her permission to die, so that he could join his family forever.

It's such a sad story, but it's among the best things I've ever read in my life. You feel like you're there, part of the story, part of every heart wrenching detail. Thank you for writing this. It's so beautiful.

He's talking to her spirit.

His "it's why I can see you now" puzzled me but it wasn't until Sasha said they'd been waiting for him that I realized both had died in the accident. The realization came too close to the end to keep me from being caught off guard.

I like being caught off guard. You definitely broke out of the typical Literotica story mold on this one. Good story, emotional ending, well written. Great job.

Very well written with confusing twist and conversations until the last chapter ties it all together in an original conclusion. But it takes a few moments of thought to reach the proper conclusion. Nice story author. Thanks for sharing.

This is the story of all of us. Someone I cared about committed suicide. I still hurt. When does the suffering end?

WTF

Anonymous .. the suffering ends when an individual makes the decision to bring all of their sorrow and pain to the foot of the cross of CHRIST, the only begotten of the Father