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Maidensdoom Wyrm

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by Anonymous

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by TimothyM03/31/14

I liked the idea that his patience and basic kind nature was rewarded. He may have thought about tupping her, whether she wanted to or not, but deep down he knew that asking and being accepted was the right path to choose.

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by SarabethW04/01/14

Short, sweet, and totally charming!

Thank you for this wonderfully charming little piece of erotica, set in the countryside of Old England. I had a delightful time reading it.

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by Finchley04/02/14

Wyrms of doom

I like the story, I've taken a star off for not trying harder with the poem at the start though. It could have scanned a lot better!

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by Anonymous04/03/14

Awesome story.. Hope you keep writing. I really like your stories.

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by patientlee04/08/14

I liked this a lot

It was rich and unexpected. You always deliver something different.

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by JagFarlane04/08/14

Different

Different and quite enjoyable, thank you for that one.

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