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My Wife's Baby Making Roulette Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by betrayedbylove04/01/14

Please

End this now while it's still a fantasy.

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by Anonymous04/01/14

Awesome

Get chapter 02 out as quickly as possible!

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by Anonymous04/01/14

Please

keep writing, closet cuckolds like betrayed need their fix

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by Anonymous04/01/14

What garbage.

Written for wimps and men who love eating cream pies deposited by other men. Ugh.

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by Anonymous04/01/14

Oooh can't wait

BRING IT ON!!!

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by EgoTrixi04/01/14

Junk!

Even for fiction way off course. No matter how much of a wimp, sub or cuckold the author would like to be...no one would willimngly encourage his wife to play this stupid "roulette".

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by Anonymous04/01/14

Giant pile of horse manure

It's bad enough that she's planning to be a cheating slut and he's playing the role of spineless, willing cuckold. There's enough of that crap on this site already. But you continue WAY over the cliff when he agrees that she's going to have another man's child. If she does, she better plan on getting a DNA test from all the men so she knows which one to go after for child support. Because this guy is going to wake up and divorce the whore. Who wouldn't? Never continue this unoriginal garbage. It was pitiful and not worth the time spent to read it.

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by Anonymous04/01/14

So stupid it's laughable.

Stick with gay, thats where you belong.

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by Anonymous04/01/14

lack of knowledge of babies genetic makeup in this day and age is plain stupid

medical and genetic history is a key to good health and life. Raising another persons child is stupidity and will have to be explained when the child is old enough to understand and the fathers future medical history is needed. So the father will be part of the childs life for however long the genetic father lives.

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by Anonymous04/01/14

stupid just stay with your daytime job

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by starmanfive04/02/14

Doesn't make sense

This is a bad fantasy. Fantasies are about the moment. What might be fun to think about might not be the best thing to pursue. How is raising another man's child sexually exciting? Someone please tel me.

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by Anonymous04/02/14

nasty tale

No LV tale. this is a chuck tale and with some baby from some unknown
source. nasty tale of a chuck

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by devilspy04/03/14

I see you got praise from the trolls.

Not bad. What is next for cuckold? Hope she puts him in chastity and has him eat creampies.

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by Anonymous04/04/14

DUMB !!!!!!!!!!!!! u stop mid storie

You stop mid storie too make us wait on WHAT WE NOW !!!!!! is going happen really ........ wasted my goddamn time worthless.... write the fucking storie's at one time are don't bother !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous04/07/14

Great!!

Amazing fantasy. I loved it!!

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by Anonymous08/18/14

You have got to continue the story!!

I keep entering your profile to see if you posted another story. You have got to continue! It's one of the best!

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by Anonymous09/18/14

Excellent!

We will look forward to future chapters! Very exciting.

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by pathetic_cuck10/15/14

Good Intro

Nice setup, you should continue the story.

I hope he eats his fill of cream pies!!

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by Anonymous12/15/14

Continue!!! PLEASE!!!

You cannot stop here!!!

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