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The Path of Pain

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/11/14

Sick chick

Damn, that is one sick chick. Five stars. Best storytelling I've read in a long, long time.

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by Anonymous04/12/14

Wow.

I found this story incredibly stimulating. My arousal seemed to build with the increase in pain. Although I've got a VCH and inner lab piercings, I can't even imagine a needle through my actual clit. Nevertheless the images conjured up by lines like "She stabbed" and "impaling it and keeping it from retracting into its hood" had me climaxing hard. What more can a girl ask for. Thank you.

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by Privates1stClass04/13/14

It takes all kinds...

to make a world, I suppose--but self-torture seems an odd way to go about it. This gal could use an understanding boy friend at the very least. My advice would be that If she really wants to be alone, she could get herself off with a Hitachi Magic Wand or a Sybian.

Interesting story.

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by jehoram04/16/14

Well done!

Full disclosure: I edited this story.

More disclosure: I thought it was too wild for this site, and too insightful, and too much a psychological study to be popular here.Boy, was I wrong.

I know how hard you worked on this story, revising and revising again. It was worth it. It's a masterpiece.

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by Anonymous10/02/14

Sublime & Exquisite

astounding.

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

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by legerdemer02/29/16

Cringing

An interesting story though not erotic to me - a study in psychology, really.

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