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Love, But

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by Cleardaynow04/01/14

Like the poem.

Very nice the way you take slightly different angles on how love or writing about it is out of reach. Like the poem.

Particularly like it in combination with your other two today.

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by Ashesh904/01/14

as we grow older we get ---what ?---

bitter ......cynical ........?? well played out thought : 5-ed .

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by demure10104/07/14

that´s just it...

Agree with both comments. Very recognisable and well done!

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by tazz31704/07/14

THOUGHTS OF WHY

I am unable to fathom. TK U MLJ LV NV

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