My Father in Law

Nice idea, but...

you really need to take more time to proofread. If you intend to expand on this story, with one or more chapters, then you should probably get an editor.

Good story

Oh sure it could be better with proofreading, but frankly these assholes who always bitch about that don't realize how tough it is to write an error free story.

Great concept and I can't wait to read how Mitch fucks her silly. Maybe even Mitch becomes a father and granddad at one time!

Been there...

I know exactly how that feels, it's like having a roommate instead of a spouse. I don't fault them one bit.

Yep I've done that

I didn't c any thing wrong with this story i tought it was great i can't wait till part 2 comes a long waitting.

shake or nod

a shake of the head says no a nod says yes

Funny story. Loved how she felt his "harness" beneath her. Take a little extra time to proofread. No prize is given for finishing a story fast but your readers would appreciate and deserve a polished version. Just my two cents

Not incest.

I'm sorry, but this isn't incest.

Re: Not Incest

In quite a few cultures and religions, yes this is incest. It is also incest by the legal definition of Incest by Affinity in a number of jurisdictions. As well as by incest by some definitions of the word, it is also considered taboo quite often.