Tales From Subspace

so excellent

Such an excellent story : I read it over several days, with breaks in between, having to recover from the onslaught, so to speak. Nightqueen knows, of course; I would say this is writing as hard as diamonds, but the image smacks of too much vanilla. A fine, no-holds-barred story. Thanks so much.

wetfille

Thanks you all

I want to thank all of you who have read this story and liked it enough to make it number one on the BDSM top list. I always thought that this work would never be read by anybody but myself, and a few select friends. I can't tell you how much this means to me. Thank you so much again- Rene

Holy fantasy turns true!!!

Wow! I read this line by line to my girlfriend who is herself insecure with what she desires. Watching her over the course of two hours go through a variety of emotions was about the hottest and most sensual thing I may have ever seen.
Thanks Nightqueen for putting it into words for her

thank you

I have always been curious about s/m and most storys fail to explian the joy to be had but you captured the complx relationships so well.

Self Discovery

Every night after work I read, took me 4 days to finish. Erotic, breath taking..I had to pause at times for the tears streaming down my face. Tears of joy, written words that made me realize as well I am not alone in this world. It amazed me that someone out there could put such intense feelings and self discovery into words. Thank you for such an enlighting story of the world of BDSM, one that shows the caring and love that many do not realize of us who live it. I look forward to reading more of your submissions.

thanks so much again

It has always been difficult for those of us drawn to BDSM to admit that we want to explore this darker part of ourselves. I hope that those who read this, and are undecided, know that they are not alone, and that this community is not made up of freaks or perverts. We are just different. Thanks for the great comments- Rene

Now this i call art

It took me three days to read this story, but every second was worth it. I cannot begin to describe the awe that filled me, while i read. I thought about ten minutes about what to write to express my feelings, but i'm at a loss.

Your words touched me. I cannot put it better.

Awesome

As did the others, this story took me several days to read. I found it amazing. Simply amazing. You have written in words what many others have not been able to capture. I applaud and thank you for your generous gift to the rest of the world.

o man ..loved it

one of the best ..sexiest stories iv read in a long time....ill be wet for days...loved it

so odd to see my thoughts written by someone else

Very well put. Thank You for writing succinctly what I am thinking and feeling. I thoroughly enjoyed this story..as a matter of fact, I couldnt do anything else today. I had to finish it.

Awsome

After a few days of reading, i have to say you are one of the most talkented writers i have had the pleasure of reading. *props*

Engrossed, should be required reading.

Your command of the language and content is extraordinary. Character development was seemless; appearing effortless, I'm envious.

Engrossed, should be required reading.

Your command of the language and content is extraordinary. Character development was seemless; appearing effortless, I'm envious.

Incredible

This has to be one of the most intriguing and accurate pieces that I have ever read. I read it all in one sitting...I couldn't stop. Thank you for the pleasure it gave me.

Absolutely Incredible!

I took my time reading this over the course of a week or so and there was never and time when I walked away from reading a chapter or two that I wasn't wet.

I identified with her kind of thinking ... like a man ... it is so close to my own. I also think that I am much like your character Annie in that I have an incredibly high tolerance for pain and a love for it too. I still sometimes wonder about myself ....

This was such a wonderful story to read and I so very much appreciate how you put into words so beautifully the experience of BDSM. Thank you for sharing your creativity this way.

wow

nice,really nice....:)

incredible

wow... that was the only word out of my mouth for the 4 hours it took me to sit here and read your story. No food, no bathroom... just reading...

Thank you, thank you, thank you is all i can say... this was very accurate and i wish i had the dedication to write a story like this, the exquisite details, the length and totally accurate account of a submissive as she finds herself in this crazy world we live in... thank you so much again.

Thank you

Stunning story, absolutely fantastic. Kept me engrossed all the way through and is certainly the best BDSM story I've ever read. Brilliant. You give Reage a run for her money for sure.

incredible....

You are where I want to be, felt as though I was her .

awesome

It took my breath away... I will read it often

Thank you.

Talent

Simply amazing. If you haven't already, you should consider publishing your work. I haven't enjoyed a read like this in a long time. Incredibly satisfying sexually, but also reaches out on the emotional level in a slave's world. Beautifully expressed.
I could only hope that you write more soon.

add one to your tally

If you're keeping track of how many people are saying you've voiced their thoughts, add one. This is officially being added to the list of "things potential boyfriends should read first".

OMG

I laughed, I cried, I got hot! Just wow. Excellent story!

~

I am normally one to stray away from multipaged stories, but from the first sintence I was hooked. I'm a slow reader so it took me the better part of a week, but I enjoyed every page. Thank you for sharing. ~

Wow...

I have never cried when reading erotic stories before.. This history was so real, so emotional, so beautifull, it touched something inside of me. I identified with Anne while reading the story, and got caught up just like I would be with a regular novel. I have read and felt so many things that I've never even thought of, and through this story I've been able to come to terms with what I like and what I don't like. Thank you, for writing this story. You have made a difference in my life. Not many author can claim to have done that.

Like all of the other comments . .

wow. That was intense, well-written, well-thought and good. I'll be reading it again and again and again.

Thanks.

truly...

truly AMAZING! i have stayed up late 2 nights in a row, just to read it. honestly beautiful, very erotic, and with characters i can identify with and understand.

WONDERFULLY done!

thank you for submitting it. :)

dear folks

Thanks again for all your wonderful comments- Anne

Amazing Story

Really amazing. For me, you didn\\\'t voice my feeling, you allowed a window into a world I know little about, but was fascinated to be allowed to feel from your point-of-view. I am literally stunned at how good this story is. 80% of the stories here are drivel, and there are maybe 5% that are really good - well-written, character development plot. Yours is the best of the best. Thank you for the huge effort I know this must have been.

wow...

I wish ther had been a higher rating than a 5. The best and most detailed porn I have ever read. Accurate description of female arousal. An incredible variety of scenes. I can't tell you the number of times I got off reading this. Thank you so much!

More ?

Really helpful in terms of being able to connect with the feelings Anne expressed.

Please let us know if, where, under what other name(s) you publish. What happens to older subs ( middle-aged) when nobody wants to dominate them? This is a real question...

Thank you

Thank you for writing this piece. I can't yet express how deeply this story really touched me. I hope that is okay to say, but I feel like I am reading about myself when Anne speaks. Twisted, anti-emotional, with brains thrown in for good measure. This story made me feel less frightened about what I'm feeling. I am filled with hope that there are other rational people like me who simply take some.... extra attention to get off. Thank you again, I really appreciate it.
Contessa

Absolutely Wonderful

One of the best stories I have read like this. I wish her journey were mine. The details and her feelings are the best part of the story.

wow

i have never read anything like it. cant decide if i want to be anne or adam.
but it certainly made me want to explore that side of myself.
is there more to come?

Amazing

It took me two nights to read this story and it was worth every second of it. I related so well to her fear of letting go emotionally, I felt like I was reading my own diary for a while. Thank you for making a story that really spoke to the heart of a submissive.

Amazing

This is an amazing story. It is a page turner, yet wise and very informative. I learned a lot about women, sexuality, and myself. I was sorry it ended. Thank you so much for writing this.

best ever

this is truely one of the masterpieces on this site. very well written

well?

I guess this is a fantasy.. Allowing anyone to abuse you like this will only end with you being treated as trash.. And trash most often ends up on a refuse dump missed only by those that really cared for you which, by the way, does not include perpetrators.. So I most devoutly hope that this only is in your fantasy.. Your penmanship is very good and that's why I give you 25.. You are definitely right in that everyone is different.. Remember though that there always will exist that thin line between love and abuse, even in this kind of relation, and to my sight your characters just walked all over it.. cheers Yoron.

Wow

This is a fabulous story. I love how much Anne grows and changes during the course of it, and I love the idea of her being able to come from being beaten. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Fantastic Story

Really amazing story. I truly enjoyed it and the characters have stuck with me. This is more than porn, it does remind me of the Beauty Trilogies. You are a writer with a gift for language.

Very good but...

While I agree with all the comments about how this is a very good story, there are a lot of basic errors from a spelling, punctuation and grammar point of view. Some of these are simple typos that would be caught with a thorough proof-read or decent editor. Some are more fundamental mistakes, and in particular the mixing up of 'to' and 'too' is at points infuriating. Also there are occasions when plurals have been used when they shouldn't have been or singulars used instead of plurals.

Overall it's a very good and enjoyable read, but I can't help thinking that if you just got an editor, or took some time to carefully proof-read everything you wrote, it would improve the quality of your writing ten-fold.

As they say, to write is human, to edit - divine.

Thanks for a well done story

I found this story by accident in the 'favorite' section of Furry Fury's list. I read it over several days and enjoyed every moment. My heart was in my mouth at your character's development. Excellent job. The few typos were painful but easy to overlook. Thanks!

This is by far one of the best pieces I have ever read. It is intelligent, emotional and red hot. I cannot wait to see more from you.

This story helps me in my own search

I am fascinated by the way in which Anne experiences her "Aha!" moments, learns about herself, accepts who she is. I'm in the early stages of transvestism (not at this moment BDSM), and I've begun to wonder about my own natural heterosexuality. It's been good to read a story that concentrates on the principal character;s self-discovery.

Bravo

I think this is the best free story I have ever read. Well done. I was very sad to see it end.

An amazing story!!

I can't imagine how long it took you to write your story!!! Thank you for taking all of that time. I couldn't stop reading. I would come home from work, over the last couple days, and run to my computer just to read what was going to happen next to Anne. Yes i have no life, lol. I do, i just completely enjoy a good read, and yours definitly was. Thanks so much...

I'm not a freak!

WOW! Blew me away! I can emphasise with Anne, I'm at thre start of my own BDSM journey, dunno if I'd go as far as she did but I do get off on pain and reading this has made me see that perhaps I'm not the freak I thought I was.
Expertly written piece, left me wanting more.....

Best story and writing style I have ever read

Sizzling hot scenes

OMG this story has got the best scenes ever. So hot my brain is in meltdown so now can't come up with a good comment.

best ive ever read!!!

Wow. I actually meant to give you a 5. I hit the 4 by mistake. I could not "put the story down". Impossibly hot!! Oh, how I wish I could have what Anne has! I look forward to reading the rest of your stories... once I recover from this one!