Exhibitionist Woman

Superb exhibitionism

Like how this builds, hope there's more of these two sexy women

enjoyed it

Enjoyed this story and the fun the characters were having. Nice use of flashbacks.

Good luck in the contest.

Nice story. I really liked that the first sexual encounter was written as a memory brought on by the photos. That was a nice touch.

AWWWWW

Does it haaaaave to be the end?

I'd love to 'watch' them on the rooftop, with the lifeguard and/or the neighbor!

Keep it up!

Waiting for more......................!

Really enjoyed your style and the way you just seem to flow into their sexuality! Waiting for more......................!

More!

Loved it.

Great story!

Really looking forward to more of this story, it's warming up very nicely :)

This is a great story

Well written, sexy, and great to read.

Great story!

Very nicely written! I enjoyed the dialog between the women, and I especially liked the reluctance, and then growing enjoyment of her nudity and sexuality, that Courtney went through.

As an idea, it would be fun to read about Courtney bringing Jeff through a process like Gianni did for her, and watch his fear--reluctance--enthusiasm grow like Courtney ' s did.

niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice

Make moooooooore

Keep it up -

Pardon the terse comment- still only have one hand available for typing

Courtney's journey is certainly as case where more is almost enough

More, please

HeyAll, this was such a hot story, and the characters have such a good chemistry with each other. Please do continue this story…

Lovely

Not only was this so hot to read, but the plot and the characters were so well developed in such a short time! Your writing style is very fun and light, and you piqued my interest veeerrry well.

best

This might be the best you've done.

Top story

well done and very well written ......love all your work....

outstanding and begging for more

Wow, I hope this is only the beginning of a series. It would be alluring, sensual and you have only started to tell their story. Wonderful trurobeachcomber@yahoo.com

Perfect exposure.

Nicly constucted story there is a subtleness in the characters that is so working.

EXCELLENT

Thank you very much.

Very erotic!

Woman on woman stories usually don't really do it for me but this one was so erotic that I couldn't put it down. I was very hard reading it.