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Twice A Father

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by boese_ami08/04/06

great!!

loved the stpory line and the fucking was awesome.....i am so glad i never became a h.s. teacher with allthose hardbodies running around

marc,

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by reader01801/24/12

geat story

liked it alot,hope there is more to come

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by livetoread03/02/16

LMAO

The story has a good start with part one.. But Jeezus have you ever had sex before? I mean really... "While her was practically rapping her ass he was eating her delicious pussy with wild abandon." Let's forget all the poor grammar and worse editing. Let's even forget that she just gave birth three days prior instead of the three month minimum. He would have to have a three FOOT long dick to fuck her and eat her at the same time... Dude.. Are you 12?????

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by Loulou731608/14/16

Let down

Part one was really good but felt that part 2 was not very well planned or executed...very rushed and details totally incorrect you would not have sex after 3 days of giving birth trust me I've had 3 kids lol touch have to wait at least 6 weeks ... shame I really enjoyed part 1 😔

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