Wow! I love the way Coke and Rum makes it hard for me to say "no." And I love being the center of attention of a couple great guys! Your story was great and it brought back some great memories while bringing up some wicked thoughts in my own mind! Looking forward to the sequels!
I know you were in a rush to put this POS story on Loving Wife, but you forgot something- a wife. Do everyone a favor and resubmit any more turds on another category. Or better yet, delete it before anyone else has to suffer reading this crap.
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Anonymous04/07/14
Three little fag boys loved it?
How special is that, they also all voted for obamma, just saying.
If you anonymous assholes can not do anything but complain and criticize, why do you keep reading the stories. Grow a pair and go some place else. Nearly all the stories on Literotica are about sharing or women who like cock, guys who like cream pies, cheating etc. If you CAN'T handle it get the hell out. Sick of you complainers, stick to the romance section. Sorry everything is so perfect in your own little world.
Lays_69
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Anonymous04/07/14
Hey Lays
Is that your real.name ? I thoight not.Listen peabrain , just like you said if you dont like something DONT READ IT.By the way rocket man your just as anonymous as.everyone else is here.Got it? As for the story it was fairly well done but might have done better in Group or Erotic Couplings.The other anon was right where is the wife? Keep writing though you have a talent
Decent wank story. Good start on the characters. Stick with it.
Just in case you aren't aware, you can simply delete the Anonymice comments if you want. They all say the same exact thing regardless of story so there isn't a whole lot of point in keeping them.
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Anonymous04/07/14
did not read
past title,,, 1 star
goodv tale for the fairie boys enjoyment
put a handle on it big boy - maybe we can arrange a meet. Then when I'm fucking you to death with my cock down your fucking faggot coward throat you should try call ing me a fucking fag one more time. Just saying annony - if you don't get off on a hot girl giving out happy hole you may need to go to the fag factory for re-alignment... you fucking queer turd cunt.
This story is hot and beautiful scripted - did i say I already gave it 5*
Better than just deleting the anonymous comments as they come up, you can simply decide to not accept anonymous feedback on your stories. It does wonders, as this community is basically toxic with the number of anonymous, misogynistic men's rights assholes who feel the need to post the same thing on every story.
An enjoyable enough story, hope to see more from you, just ignore the anon cowards.
This story gave me a hard-on, which is all I'm looking for in a Literotica story. I've never understood the people who seem to read these stories for their moral righteousness.
This is a hot and unique situation, and was written well. Keep writing, and ignore all the ill-tempered trolls.
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Anonymous04/08/14
Funny
Witless, Karen Woods and swingerjoe repeat the same thing every time they comment and the anons are trolls? Laughable. Whats the definition of insanity? Doing the same thing over and over and expecting a different result. Guess what? Its not going to change . Great story by the way. 5*
Kept moving along, the threesome happened organically, as alcohol is the universal solvent of stretching sexual boundaries. Cant wait to see what Chapt 2 adds to the story.
If you are going to engage the trolls, take the gloves off, my friend. No half-measures please.
This was an erotic story of impromptu slut-sharing. Not technically a LW story, since it was just a gf, but the theme is consistent.
Well written erotica. Good build-up and great use of the written word. As a stroker with this theme, I think it is excellent. Not my bag, but I've been one end of a good old fashioned spit-roast in my youth, as the interloper, rather than as the protag in this story. Whatever floats your boat, author. Really good execution. A realistic and erotic slut story, especially when she is ambivalent, is titillating.
Have fun and write for your pleasure.
Wow thanks for all the feedback!:) my girlfriend and I will get married soon enough and then the stories will better fit the 'Loving Wives' category haha
In the meantime, my girlfriend and I are loving the feedback:) Thanks again! Sequel coming soon!
It was a good story. I want to hear what happens the rest of the weekend.
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Anonymous05/29/14
mmm hot
id so love to see another guy guiding his hard cock inside my girlfriend for real its been a real long time desire of mine I haven't told my girlfriend in case she gets upset a few months ago I had planned an evening and got the drinks going and invited my best mate over I got my girlfriend terri real drunk and my mate was fairly typsey and spread terries legs and took her knickers off as my mate was in loo when he returned he sat in chair opposite and I knew he had great view of my gfs neat lil fanny I saw him eyes fixed between terries legs I knew hed always eyed her up in past and new hed love to get inside her tight lil pussy I saw his jeans get a big bulge and had planned to let him get his cock inside terries lil vagina for real when I chickend out and discreetly coverd terri up pretending I didn't know he had seen anything I think maybe my best mate would not be appropriate as much as I was hard for wanting to see him get stuck into her fanny but I thought about the problems it could bring would he think he could have her anytime , ? I think I should find a stranger if I really do act out my long time desire to eliminate any insecureties and that way I can be sure it will be a 1 time only think , what do you think ??? please tell me if I should really do it as I know I really want to see it 1 time did you have any worrys after you watched another guy enter and screw your gf, wife ? and yea id definitely love to see him cum inside my terries fanny hard and see his cum dripping and dangle from her lil pussy lips mmm as its a 1 time only thing :-) my email is paulie220471@hotmail.com regards paul
English
Not a bad read.
A Great Night
Wow! I love the way Coke and Rum makes it hard for me to say "no." And I love being the center of attention of a couple great guys! Your story was great and it brought back some great memories while bringing up some wicked thoughts in my own mind! Looking forward to the sequels!
Absolute filth
written by a pro. Loved it.
I know you were in a rush to put this POS story on Loving Wife, but you forgot something- a wife. Do everyone a favor and resubmit any more turds on another category. Or better yet, delete it before anyone else has to suffer reading this crap.
Three little fag boys loved it?
How special is that, they also all voted for obamma, just saying.
Anonymous Assholes!
If you anonymous assholes can not do anything but complain and criticize, why do you keep reading the stories. Grow a pair and go some place else. Nearly all the stories on Literotica are about sharing or women who like cock, guys who like cream pies, cheating etc. If you CAN'T handle it get the hell out. Sick of you complainers, stick to the romance section. Sorry everything is so perfect in your own little world.
Lays_69
Hey Lays
Is that your real.name ? I thoight not.Listen peabrain , just like you said if you dont like something DONT READ IT.By the way rocket man your just as anonymous as.everyone else is here.Got it? As for the story it was fairly well done but might have done better in Group or Erotic Couplings.The other anon was right where is the wife? Keep writing though you have a talent
Welcome to LW
Decent wank story. Good start on the characters. Stick with it.
Just in case you aren't aware, you can simply delete the Anonymice comments if you want. They all say the same exact thing regardless of story so there isn't a whole lot of point in keeping them.
did not read
past title,,, 1 star
goodv tale for the fairie boys enjoyment
Hey Annymouse
put a handle on it big boy - maybe we can arrange a meet. Then when I'm fucking you to death with my cock down your fucking faggot coward throat you should try call ing me a fucking fag one more time. Just saying annony - if you don't get off on a hot girl giving out happy hole you may need to go to the fag factory for re-alignment... you fucking queer turd cunt.
This story is hot and beautiful scripted - did i say I already gave it 5*
Better than just deleting the anonymous comments as they come up, you can simply decide to not accept anonymous feedback on your stories. It does wonders, as this community is basically toxic with the number of anonymous, misogynistic men's rights assholes who feel the need to post the same thing on every story.
An enjoyable enough story, hope to see more from you, just ignore the anon cowards.
5 Stars from me
This story gave me a hard-on, which is all I'm looking for in a Literotica story. I've never understood the people who seem to read these stories for their moral righteousness.
This is a hot and unique situation, and was written well. Keep writing, and ignore all the ill-tempered trolls.
Funny
Witless, Karen Woods and swingerjoe repeat the same thing every time they comment and the anons are trolls? Laughable. Whats the definition of insanity? Doing the same thing over and over and expecting a different result. Guess what? Its not going to change . Great story by the way. 5*
Good first effort
Kept moving along, the threesome happened organically, as alcohol is the universal solvent of stretching sexual boundaries. Cant wait to see what Chapt 2 adds to the story.
cuck tale
for adoring cucks.
1star
x_witless_x
If you are going to engage the trolls, take the gloves off, my friend. No half-measures please.
This was an erotic story of impromptu slut-sharing. Not technically a LW story, since it was just a gf, but the theme is consistent.
Well written erotica. Good build-up and great use of the written word. As a stroker with this theme, I think it is excellent. Not my bag, but I've been one end of a good old fashioned spit-roast in my youth, as the interloper, rather than as the protag in this story. Whatever floats your boat, author. Really good execution. A realistic and erotic slut story, especially when she is ambivalent, is titillating.
Have fun and write for your pleasure.
Thanks
Wow thanks for all the feedback!:) my girlfriend and I will get married soon enough and then the stories will better fit the 'Loving Wives' category haha
In the meantime, my girlfriend and I are loving the feedback:) Thanks again! Sequel coming soon!
Come on now people
It was a good story. I want to hear what happens the rest of the weekend.
mmm hot
id so love to see another guy guiding his hard cock inside my girlfriend for real its been a real long time desire of mine I haven't told my girlfriend in case she gets upset a few months ago I had planned an evening and got the drinks going and invited my best mate over I got my girlfriend terri real drunk and my mate was fairly typsey and spread terries legs and took her knickers off as my mate was in loo when he returned he sat in chair opposite and I knew he had great view of my gfs neat lil fanny I saw him eyes fixed between terries legs I knew hed always eyed her up in past and new hed love to get inside her tight lil pussy I saw his jeans get a big bulge and had planned to let him get his cock inside terries lil vagina for real when I chickend out and discreetly coverd terri up pretending I didn't know he had seen anything I think maybe my best mate would not be appropriate as much as I was hard for wanting to see him get stuck into her fanny but I thought about the problems it could bring would he think he could have her anytime , ? I think I should find a stranger if I really do act out my long time desire to eliminate any insecureties and that way I can be sure it will be a 1 time only think , what do you think ??? please tell me if I should really do it as I know I really want to see it 1 time did you have any worrys after you watched another guy enter and screw your gf, wife ? and yea id definitely love to see him cum inside my terries fanny hard and see his cum dripping and dangle from her lil pussy lips mmm as its a 1 time only thing :-) my email is paulie220471@hotmail.com regards paul
Next?
I can't wait for your next story! Very hot!
Good shit
i love fucking my gf with my friend. She only let him fuck her once but she likes to give him head wile we bang
Hot
I've shared a couple of my girlfriends with buddies and once with a dude we met together at a bar. Major turn on.
Are we continuing?
It's been almost 2 years!
Very Realistic
Very well written. And so realistic because something very similar happened to me as well.
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