Not a Date Ch. 02

A PG comment

Another wonderful piece. A 5 on my side. Take your time with chapter 3 ( perfection cannot be rushed.) Thanks for sharing.

More please

Let us see the tattoo but do continue

This is turning out yo be a great story. Keep it up

MORE

Love the story, write more!!

WOW

I wish this website was a pic book cuz imaging it is hard but fun keeping going plz

Sexy Story

Your story has a tingling sexual tension that is fantastic. Please continue with this series.

Nice

Very entertaining, looking forward to a chapter 3. Would love to se some more romance : )

Love It

Love this story but chapter's r 2 short. Can't wait for the next Ch.

Love it!!!

Can't wait for more. Enjoying very much. Keep up the good work!!

In love

I love this story. Its like what every gay guy dreams about 💚

Yes!

If only there was a way to give you more than 5 stars, this story deserves it!

One surprise

The story is well told but goes against convention in one sense: the boss is behaving dominantly in the office scene, but the narrator is anything but submissive -- rather, he is behaving like a long-time friend and equal. Unless you have some specific evolution of the story line in mind for the next few chapters, this is somewhat discordant. I'll keep looking for the follow-up.

Love it!!!

Such a good story.Ryan sounds perfect and I love the way he teases.Waiting on a third

good...

Gah I can't decide if I want to have hot monkey sex with Ryan or if I wanna smack him round the head with a piece of 2x4 because though hes hot HE seems like an ass too. Lol.

Personally though the sex is hot as hell I would like to get to know the characters more before there doing the down and dirty.
But still it's well written, funny and hot so welldone

Casey 1988

I like the story. Keep it up. ~_^

Bloody hell

That was even hotter, and I liked the hints that Ryan was emotionally involved and that Jake still had a mind of his own and could come up with witty remarks. I want him to be an equal partner in this budding relationship, and I certainly want to see him top Ryan. Or else tell him to fuck off.

I love the back and forth between these two...the banter, the chemistry, etc. They are hot together. I like how you manage to keep the relationship at that knife-edge point of hot as hell, emotional involvement definitely starting on both sides, but the unsureness of what it is. Maybe at dinner we'll find out his boss's intentions! Hot Hot Hot... I loved how Jake still was able to get himself together before being pushed out of the office and get those funny jabs in at Ryan and not just be sent out so blown away it was all the power on Ryan's side who'd screwed him silent....He was funny telling him to find a u-tube video for technique. Though Jake better recover a bit better or Ryan will have to fire him for not getting his work done! lol I definitely want more of the D/s stuff too.

I'm loving the chemistry between the two of these men!!

WOW AS IN HOLY SHIT WOW

I couldn't stop smirking the whole time! Damn this is so hot! And Jake is damn funny as Ryan is freaking sexy. Amazing work damn.