Protecting Eden

Bit more

Could have had more details but I like the pace. Short and focused. Nice job.

nice

I liked it. they both became intoxicated with each other. The mammal in both of them came out. maybe a chapter?

Like reading a D-list bodice ripper...these are not human beings, they are odd automatons acting out a play with all the grace of a 6th grade school production...terrible

How is this noncon?

Love it l!

I always like a tree planted (wink wink). This is a terrific nub rubber. It was a quick romp , but with a message. I really enjoyed it. We should save our planet, everyone.

-Susie D.

SMUT pure and simple! Barely a story.....and I LOVE it! Write more like this!

Is this non consent?

Neither was protesting. The story was hot, but I thing erotic couplings would be a better fit.

Thanks

Thanks patientlee for the clarification. Just updated.

Too fast

Nice premise but feels rushed.