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After the Fight

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by Anonymous

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by greenmountaineer04/06/14

Again, very imaginative, a narrative that suggests rather than describes in well crafted concise language.

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by todski2804/08/14

homo eroticism

Is not normally my type of thing but your writing cleared my own normal discomfort of subject matter to show a very interesting poem. Language, flows seamless and has a masculine embarrassment that speaks true.

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