All Comments on 'Drying Off Downstairs'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
soooooooo dam hot

so hot and erotic from the very first.......lets hear some more of uncle bill his neice

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
many degrees hot

110 degrees hot and sexy

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Whew!

That was hot. I liked the ending, very awesome. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A suggestion

That was really hot, however.....

You should use the editors they have on the site here for the authors. The writing could have used some touching up, which is what the editors are for. You're a good writer, you should definitely keep it up! If you make use of the editors, then the errors won't be there in the future to detract from the story itself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Sweet!

Makes you want to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
want it too

Hot 100 tine . would like that to happen to me

OseekerOseeker9 days ago

Stop....Don't!

Stop....Don't! Stop....

Don't Stop.....Don't Stop!!!

Lucky Uncle....

Nice short story.....

4 stars

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