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A Father's Secret Lust

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by donaldrutter51304/10/14

Good one

Not bad for a first story hope you add to it . Keep writing and good luck...

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by FinnGriswold04/10/14

Can't wait for more!

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by BubbleGumPink04/10/14

This Daddy's Girl wants more please!! :-)

Very nice... You are on to something..keep it up!

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by Anonymous04/10/14

very nice . it was too hot.

Very very hot i love it .

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by FreakSlave04/10/14

Wow!

Beautiful and hot as hell!

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by peebudy04/10/14

a dream

o love sleeping stories and this one was great! keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous04/11/14

He slipped a hand under her thong, for the first time feeling his daughter's cunt.

That has to be one of the high points of a father's life. I love this story by a gifted writer who's 18 to 22 years old, so maybe still a late teenager. He's clearly a boy with a marvelously dirty mind, I bet he was hard when he wrote it and shot a good healthy load of his own at the end. In this great story, Arabella's father like plenty of dads is deeply drawn to his baby girl, above all to her adorable little coochie. As she grows up into a lovely young woman, he finds himself getting hard around her all the time. Arabella notices what's jumping around in her daddy's pants and she likes seeing it, it's so damn big, it makes her moist between her slender legs. When her father starts coming to her as she lies in her bed, Arabella pretends to be asleep. Soon her father's fingering his daughter's pretty little twat, inside and out. To her delighted astonishment, through half-closed eyes, she sees him jerk his big daddy-dick and blow his heavy daddy-balls all over her T-shirt and thong. As the girl gets covered by some of the same sperm that made her, without even touching herself Arabella is seized by a great convulsive cum. Discovering she's been awake all along, dad's abashed at first. But when his little girl starts handling his fat cock he--and it--perk up right away. I trust the brilliant Mr. C will bring that cock and that twat together in the breathlessly awaited sequel to A Father's Secret Lust.

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by Anonymous04/13/14

PLEASE....

write more...LOVE This one!!!

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by Anonymous04/14/14

Great!!!

One of the greatest stories I've ever read. Hope you can do more thrill stories. more thrill.

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by Anonymous06/09/14

excellent

Please please do a sequel ....

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by Anonymous01/12/15

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