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All Comments on 'What is Around Us Ch. 01'

by anna_leo_

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angelicbeautyangelicbeautyabout 10 years ago

Was a good start. But in the chapters I'd love to see the explanation of her being g raped and who this person is. It seemed to jump a bit and leave things out

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
You need an Editor

It's a good start, but you really need to get an editor.

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