All Comments on 'I'm Here, Sugar'

did not like your tale. they meet, she goes stupid and he wants a blow job .

that is your tale. not much of a tale

"Writing is my life, and a writer is what I was born to be."

But if no one reads what you write, have you really written?

What you submitted is masturbation, not communication.

Your nuts and bolts writing skills are obviously solid but the story so far is confusing. Why does this mysterious guy have such control over this best selling author? He takes her into a back room and she blows him. Really? Is this a mind control story? I know at times women can be hard to fathom but this is bordering on science fiction.

I couldn't get past less than a quarter down the page, unbelievably BORING!