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Talking 2 Myself
This was way too short. I was excited to read then it just fell flat .I was expecting all kinds of things to happen.
I like it
Make part 2 lil longer
More?
Part 2? Longer version somewhere? It was a nice start, but we're hungry for more.
Great Premise!
I really like the premise and potential for this story. I would encourage you to flesh it out a little more and perhaps submit a more substantial edition. But I'm not complaining! Keep up the good work!
short and fast
more.......
It made you feel better?
To know that a woman you raped got pregnant? Doesn't make for a very good story. He was certainly a thoroughly despicable character and she was someone to pity. Makes for nothing erotic or interesting. Certainly not erotic. No stars.
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