All Comments on 'Service With A Smile Ch. 01'

This Story had a great deal of potental as it was set up and then left the reader hanging. In my opinon it needs to be finished.

Thank you for your comment.

I did have every intention of adding a second (maybe concluding) chapter to this ... and life took over for a while. You have reminded me that I must finish it.

this is part one ? would like to read the rest.