Mother's Secret Garden

Interesting

I'm giving this story 5 stars for being creative and original, although the scat stuff is a bit much.

Should have a scat warning at the beginning. Gross

I'm not into scat..

However it was perfect for the characters and story line. Good writing.

"Yes, dear, of course It's safe, and it's natural."

Shigella, campylobacter, salmonella and E.coli are four bacteria commonly present in fecal matter. These bacteria, along with parasites like amebas and giardia, can cause severe diarrhea, abdominal pain and cramping, bloody stools, fever, nausea and vomiting. The viruses Hepatitis A and E may also be transmitted through contact with fecal matter.

LOVE

LOVELY!

Well...

They didn't follow up on the whole "pot" thing. And I don't like it how they killed Jake and his mom off and ended the series. I would have loved for it to continue.

Why?

I felt that their death at the end added nothing to the story and was extremely lame and pointless

1 star

That was gross made me throw up some.

Awesome

Hi, loved the whole thing. Quite an imagination. It is refreshing to read a story so filled with filth and wickedness. I did not mind the tasting and licking of poo, it made my stomach turn, but kept me tugging on my erection without missing a stroke. I wish I was there to add my semen to the secret garden. And, yes, the pot plants was not necessary. It was fun regardless!

I was laughing so hard, I couldn't stop

This was funny as hell, I had tears coming out my eyes.

misuse of term

Urine does NOT come from the vagina - it comes from the urethra which is a part of the vulva. The vagina is a tube.