I enjoy your stories. They are very erotic. The downside is that Jim is portrayed as a gullible fool and the others are therefore seen as contemptuous of him which makes them less attractive characters. If you could make Jim aware of what is going on and let him balance things up a bit you could overcome this.
Some Balance Would be Good
I enjoy your stories. They are very erotic. The downside is that Jim is portrayed as a gullible fool and the others are therefore seen as contemptuous of him which makes them less attractive characters. If you could make Jim aware of what is going on and let him balance things up a bit you could overcome this.
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