An Unforgettable Afternoon

Nice storyline looking forward for next posting...do it asap.....

Very nice start to storyline and interesting picturing of characters. Bring the next part asap...you have established a good foundation for a great and steamy story

superb,

Takes me back a long way, but had a very similar experience in London when visiting relatives, though still a virgin, but did not get a feel until we got to his home, and it was also BIG.
I lost my cherry two days later and was amazed to have managed such a monster, but being a much older man he was patient and never ever in a hurry.

princess

to be treated like a princess is magical but its better when you're dressed like a princess

Keep on writing!

I'd very much like to read more! Being such a mature man's little princess is my wet dream.

Nice start

A very nice start. Looking forward to the next chapter, it should be really hot. Please give us more asap.

Want more

I'm waiting for the next episode with bated breath. If it lives up to the start, I'll give both a fiv-star rating; else 4 stars for this one.

great job

Great job at building suspense and sexual tension. Definitely left the hook to keep us reading more.

SO HOT!

Well done.
I do hope you have a second chapter ready - you left us hanging!