.....and I certainly hope to be able to read your continuation of this relationship to a pleasant conclusion for all concerned !!! Nicely started. Thanks,
Captures the raw eroticism of reluctant, but very consensual submission. Five stars.
And a young man, at that.
could have been a lot filthier
Ended too soon, like a story without a movie that screams "sequel!"
This is a good start to what could be a good series. I would suggest that a little more detail or depth in the story might help.
You expertly painted the picture of a realistic first meeting between someone desperate to please.
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.....and I certainly hope to be able to read your continuation of this relationship to a pleasant conclusion for all concerned !!! Nicely started. Thanks,
Nicely done
Captures the raw eroticism of reluctant, but very consensual submission. Five stars.
Written by a man
And a young man, at that.
rating
could have been a lot filthier
Need to go deeper
Ended too soon, like a story without a movie that screams "sequel!"
Good Start
This is a good start to what could be a good series. I would suggest that a little more detail or depth in the story might help.
wonderful
You expertly painted the picture of a realistic first meeting between someone desperate to please.
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