Started out in past tense, switched to present tense, and finished in past tense. Why not just stay in past tense all the way through? I don't think anything was improved by using present tense.
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Started out in past tense, switched to present tense, and finished in past tense. Why not just stay in past tense all the way through? I don't think anything was improved by using present tense.
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