Love's Eventide

sad tale

sad tale but we all will have to face it some day. only true love will help
through the passing. only the strong will not let the care and sometimes mean
things the sick say turn your love to hate. sad tale

True Love!

A wonderful and sad story of true love. Thank you.

Every once in a while a story appears on these virtual pages that stands out among all others. Really well written.

What can you say??

The story was lovely and so moving... it reminded me of mine...A Little Bit of Death.
A nice job is all that needs to be said.

too close to home

Having a very sick wife, who is the love of my life, I have almost lost 6 times in the last 12 years, this story hits too close to home. Very good story and so close to home. Thank you

Sad

A sad story but a strangely uplifting description of something that will come to all of us in time. 5 well earned stars.

real

Most of are here for the sexual stories, but it never hurts to remember that there is a real and true love. Exelently written

ah...Real True Love

...is written about at last.

Beautiful

Great writing. Sounds like you have been there and are describing a real event in your life. Made many tears come to my eyes. Thank you for posting it.

Sad, but lovely

True love, true to life.

Thank You*****

For sharing this heart warming story of love.

Beautiful

Quite beautiful, very moving piece. Thank you for submitting this.

Thank you, Readers

I appreciate each of you taking the time to read my first submission, and I especially thank those who took the time to leave comments.

I decided not to name the characters to make it a little easier for each reader to add important personal texture and detail to this essentially universal experience. I hope everyone experiences love of the quality shared by these characters despite the heightened pain that such love can sometimes bring.

I was him

Wow, that hit home. This story is beautiful. I like your Style.
Thank you

Beautiful...

Brought a tear to my eyes.

Wow!

This is amazing, and if you hadn't mentioned this was your first work I would have never known. Please keep writing and enthrall us with more beautiful stories.

Best story I've read in a while. This brought a tear to my eye and really touched my heart! I love your writing style and do hope you continue writing more of these types of stories. I just wish you gave us a little more info on her sickness. I know its not really that important what her illness is, but I'm curious all the same.

Beautiful

Poignant. Moving. I cried. Beautifully written.

lovely

my eyes are moist

Beautifully written

Thank you is all I have to say

i was him also

not w/ my wife but my father..mom had called and ask me to spend the night..he passed @ 5 am i too could not watch as the hauled him to the mortuary...stlcris

Dammit!

I really hadn't planned on starting the day by crying.

Of course, I wouldn't have been crying if this hadn't been so well written. Her hero indeed. May we all find ourselves with such a hero(ine) in our lives when needed.

Well done, and a tearful 5 stars.

VisualPerv

emotional. I loved it.

Nice emotional story.
Loved it, though i was hooting for happy ending.

Great story

There's not much more to say other than "great story." I hope you write some more.