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Its got a good plot but you desperately need an editor
A little help
Thank you for the comment. As for the editor, can you recommend me someone? How to post that I need editor?
re: editor
There is a link on the stories page that says:
Volunteer Editors - Find someone to help you with your writing.
Good story line
Good characters. Interesting situations. Hope you write more of this story. thanks
i do believe there will be more chapters
The continuation
Here is part three. http://www.literotica.com/s/the-contrast-ch-03
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