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Very nice - a fine introduction
Thank you for sharing your talent with us, MissEleanor_erotica, and welcome to Literotica. This was a good story, if a bit on the short side; please keep writing for us - four stars.
Fabulous Beginning
Thank you for a wonderful bit or erotica and love. I think you will be a writer to watch for. Use your imagination and not those of us who comment, just let us sit back and be amazed. T'was a fiver for me, again thanks
Welcome, newbie.
This was a wonderful first piece and perhaps the start of a longer story? Sexy and poignant and life affirming make interesting bedfellows. Hope we see more from you.
I loved how this was about sex and yet so much more. Good start. I hope you will write more for us, about whatever you want.
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